Department of English

Faculty of Arts, Chulalongkorn University


 

Portrait of a Lady

(1920)


William Carlos Williams

(September 17, 1883 – March 4, 1963)

 


Your thighs are appletrees

whose blossoms touch the sky.

Which sky? The sky
where Watteau hung a lady's

slipper. Your knees
5
are a southern breeze—or

a gust of snow. Agh! what

sort of man was Fragonard?

—as if that answered

anything. Ah, yes—below
10
the knees, since the tune
drops that way, it is
one of those white summer days,
the tall grass of your ankles
flickers upon the shore— 15
Which shore?—
the sand clings to my lips—
Which shore?
Agh, petals maybe. How
should I know? 20
Which shore? Which shore?
I said petals from an appletree.

 

Notes

3–5  The sky where Watteau hung a lady's slipper: The painting that the speaker envisions, seems to be not Watteau's but Fragonard's The Swing (1767).

Fragonard, The Swing (1767)
Jean-Honoré Fragonard, The Swing, 1767, oil on canvas, The Wallace Collection
  • The origin of Fragonard's The Swing is by chance known. The writer Charles Collé recorded having met the painter Gabriel-François Doyen on 2 October 1767: 'Would you believe it!' A gentleman of the court had sent for him shortly after a religious painting of his had been exhibited in Paris and when Doyen presented himself he found him at his 'pleasure house' with his mistress. 'He started by flattering me with courtesies', Doyen related, 'and finished by avowing that he was dying with a desire to have me make a picture, the idea of which he was going to outline. "I should like, Madame (pointing to his mistress) on a swing that a bishop would set going. You will place me in such a way that I would be able to see the legs of the lovely girl, and better still, if you want enliven your picture a little more..." I confess, M. Doyen said to me, that this proposition, which I wouldn't have expected, considering the character of the picture that led to it, perplexed me and left me speechless for a moment. I collected myself, however, enough to say to him almost at once: "Ah Monsieur, it is necessary to add to the essential idea of your picture by making Madame's shoes fly into the air and having some cupids catch them."' Doyen did not accept the commission, however, and passed it on to Fragonard. The identity of the patron is unknown, though he was at one time thought to have been the Baron de Saint-Julien, the Receiver General of the French Clergy, which would have explained the request to include a bishop pushing a the swing. This idea as well as that of having himself and his mistress portrayed was evidently dropped by the patron, whoever he may have been. The picture was depersonalized and, due to Fragonard's extremely sensuous imagination, became a universal image of joyous, carefree sexuality.

    The theme is that of love and the rising tide of passion, as intimated by the sculptural group in the lower centre of the picture. (Dolphins driven by cupids drawing the water-chariot of Venus symbolize the impatient surge of love). Beneath the girl on the swing, lying in a great bush, a tangle of flowers and foliage, is the young lover, gasping with anticipation. The bush is, evidently, a private place as it is enclosed by little fences. But the youth has found his way to it. Thrilling to the sight now offered him, the youth reaches out with hat in hand. (A hat in eighteenth-century erotic imagery covered not only the head but also another part of the male body when inadvertently exposed.) The feminine counterpart to the hat was the shoe and in The Swing the girl's shoe flies off her pretty foot to be lost in the undergrowth. This idea had been suggested originally by Doyen, as he recounted to Collé, and in French paintings of the period a naked foot and lost shoe often accompany the more familiar broken pitcher as a symbol of lost virginity.

    However, all these erotic symbols would lie inert on the canvas had not Fragonard charged the whole painting with the amorous ebullience and joy of an impetuous surrender to love. In a shimmer of leaves and rose petals, lit up by a sparkling beam of sunshine, the girl, in a frothy dress of cream and juicy pink, rides the swing with happy, thoughtless abandon. Her legs parted, her skirts open; the youth in the rose-bush, hat off, arm erect, lunges towards her. Suddenly, as she reaches the peak of her ride, her shoe flies off. (Hugh Honour and John Fleming 628–29)
  • A woman on a swing was an established motif in French Rococo art, especially in paintings of fêtes galantes, those poetic celebrations of the aristocratic life of leisure. Children were occasionally shown enjoying the pastime, very infrequently men. Women and girls monopolized it and the swing soon acquired further connotations. It seemed to epitomize the pleasure-loving, licentious spirit of the ancien régime and in particular the fickleness and inconstancy ascribed to women, especially in high society, their teasing changes of mind if not of heart in the perpetual to-and-fro game of light-hearted, feet-off-the-ground flirtation. (Hugh Honour and John Fleming 614)

 


4: Watteau:


Fragonard:


21  Which shore? Which Shore?: When the poem was first published in The Dial (Aug. 1920), two lines followed this one before the final line:

—the petals from some hidden

appletree—Which shore?







The Dial (1920)


The Collected Poems (1991)
Your thighs are appletrees

  Your thighs are appletrees

whose blossoms touch the sky.


whose blossoms touch the sky.

Which sky? The sky


Which sky? The sky
where Watteau hung a lady's


where Watteau hung a lady's

slipper. Your knees 5


slipper. Your knees
5
are a southern breeze—or


are a southern breeze—or

a gust of snow. Agh! what


a gust of snow. Agh! what

sort of man was Fragonard?


sort of man was Fragonard?

—As if that answered


—as if that answered

anything.—Ah, yes. Below 10


anything. Ah, yes—below
10
the knees, since the tune


the knees, since the tune
drops that way, it is


drops that way, it is
one of those white summer days,


one of those white summer days,
the tall grass of your ankles


the tall grass of your ankles
flickers upon the shore— 15


flickers upon the shore— 15
Which shore?—


Which shore?—
the sand clings to my lips—


the sand clings to my lips—
Which shore?


Which shore?
Agh, petals maybe. How


Agh, petals maybe. How
should I know? 20


should I know? 20
Which shore? Which shore?


Which shore? Which shore?
—the petals from some hidden


I said petals from an appletree.
appletree—Which shore?




I said petals from an appletree.




 





Portrait of a Woman in Bed, Al Que Quiere! (1917)

There's my things
drying in the corner:
that blue skirt
joined to the grey shirt—
 
I'm sick of trouble!
Lift the covers
if you want me
and you'll see
the rest of my clothes—
though it would be cold
lying with nothing on!
 
I won't work
and I've got no cash.
What are you going to do
about it?
—and no jewelry
(the crazy fools)
 
But I've my two eyes
and a smooth face
and here's this! look!
it's high!
 
There's brains and blood
in there—
my name's Robitza!
Corsets
can go to the devil—
and drawers along with them—
What do I care!
 
My two boys?
—they're keen!
Let the rich lady
care for them—
they'll beat the school
or
let them go to the gutter—
that ends trouble.
 
This house is empty
isn't it?
Then it's mine
because I need it.
Oh, I won't starve
while there's the Bible
to make them feed me.
 
Try to help me
if you want trouble
or leave me alone—
that ends trouble.
 
The county physician
is a damned fool
and you
can go to hell!
 
You could have closed the door
when you came in;
do it when you go out.
I'm tired.





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—William Carlos Williams, "Portrait of a Woman in Bed," The Collected Poems, vol. 1, eds. A. Walton Litz and Christopher MacGowan (1991): 87–88.



Portrait of a Woman at Her Bath

it is a satisfaction
a joy
to have one of those
in the house
 
when she takes a bath
she unclothes
herself she is no
Venus
 
I laugh at her
an Inca
shivering at the well
the sun is
 
glad of a fellow to
marvel at
the birds and flowers
look in





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15

 

—William Carlos Williams, "Portrait of a Woman at Her Bath," Pictures from Brueghel and Other Poems (New York: New Directions, 1962): 46.
 



Poetry

I propose sweeping changes from top to bottom of the poetic structure. I said structure. So now you are begging to get the drift of my theme. I say we are through with the iambic pentameter as presently conceived, at least for dramatic verse; through with the measured quatrain, the staid concatenations of sounds in the usual stanza, the sonnet. More has been done than you think about this though not yet been specifically named for what it is. I believe something can be said. Perhaps all that I can of here is to call attention to it: a revolution in the conception of the poetic foot—pointing out the evidence of something that has been going on for a long time.


—William Carlos Williams, "The Poem as a Field of Action," University of Washington (1948)




Reading and Making Notes

In getting my books, I have been always solicitous of an ample margin; this not so much through any love of the thing in itself, however agreeable, as for the facility it affords me of pencilling suggested thoughts, agreements and differences of opinion, or brief critical comments in general. Where what I have to note is too much to be included within the narrow limits of a margin, I commit it to a slip of paper, and deposit it between the leaves; taking care to secure it by an imperceptible portion of gum tragacanth paste.

—Edgar Allan Poe, "Marginalia," United States Magazine and Democratic Review (1844): 484.


David Foster Wallace’s Annotated Copy of Don DeLillo's Players

Wallace marginal notes
 
 —"Writers and Their Margin Notes," Entropy (2014)


Student Marginal Annotation of Williams' "Portrait of a Lady" and Transcription

Student marginal notes of "Portrait of a Lady"
- a Lady: Shows not a lady but certain parts of a lady
- thighs: Why begin so low? Why begin with thigh? Why begin not with face, eyes, hair, brow, lips?
- touch the sky: moving up; awkward comical attempt at love talk; rate X
- Which sky?: We hear from the woman
- Which: as if there are many
- Your knees are a southern breeze: Comparison doesn't make sense?; attempting to be too different
- Agh!: Frustration? interruption; comment
- Fragonard: another painter; misremembers artist; attempt to show off cultural learning
- as if that answered anything: Whose comment?
- Ah yes—below: moving down
- since the tune: logic, flow, trajectory; this is a song?
- drops: down
- drops that way: But who's calling it? You!
- tall grass of your ankles: !; original but nonsensical metaphor; still works? or becomes empty nonsense?
- flickers: odd verb for grass and feet
- Which shore?: Does it matter? Why this question?
- sand clings to my lips: What is the feet doing that it is at the speaker's lips?
- Agh: Same Agh speaker as above?
- petals maybe: What kind of answer is this?
- How should I know?: poet/courting man doesn't have to know what he speaks or understands his own words, poem, or logic
- Which shore? Which shore?: like waves beating shore
- I said: becomes absurd
 




 

 Study Questions

  • In what ways is "Portrait of a Lady" like and unlike the blazon tradition in love poetry?
  • Consider this portrait of a lady alongside Williams' other portraits ("Portrait of a Woman in Bed" and "Portrait of a Woman Bath"). Explain how Williams plays with the tradition of portrait painting.
  • How does Williams suggest motion? Why is movement significant in the poem?
  • Compare the student's marginal commentary of "Portrait of a Lady" above with yours. What are the similarities and differences between the points you choose to remark on and the student's? How does annotating as you read help you to read? How does discussing your ideas with others help you to read?

 





Vocabulary

diction
connotation
denotation
metaphor
imagery
visual imagery
kinetic imagery
trope
trajectory
rhythm
pace
repetition
assonance
consonance
tone
intertextuality
imagism
objectivism
modernism
newness
subversion
satire
tradition
blason or blazon
form
line break
enjambment
aesthetics
beauty
love
clarity
cleanness
immediacy




Sample Student Responses to William Carlos Williams's "Portrait of a Lady" 


Study Question:


Response 1:


 

 

 

 

 

Student Name

2202235 Reading and Analysis for the Study of English Literature

Acharn Puckpan Tipayamontri

January 15, 2016

Reading Response 1

 

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Reference


Williams, William Carlos. The Collected Poems of William Carlos Williams. Vol. 1. Eds. A. Walton Litz and Christopher MacGowan. New York: New Directions, 1991. Print.



Links

 

 

Media


  • William Carlos Williams Interview, Mary McBride Show (1950 audio clip, 25:05 min.)

  • William Carlos Williams, New Jersey Hall of Fame (1:18 min.)


  • Herbert Leibowitz, "'Something Urgent I Have to Say to You,': The Life and Works of William Carlos Williams," The New York Society Library (2011; 1 hr. 6:10 min.)

 


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